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01/17/19
It's jaw dropping anyone would do such a thing. What a scoundrel. I noticed you did a POV shift starting with Martin's POV in the beginning, then later in the story you switch to Jenny's.
I just have to know if she sent him any money! Truth or fiction--no please. This scoundrel surely did make me happy to have my husband. Great story!
I just have to know if she sent him any money! Truth or fiction--no please. This scoundrel surely did make me happy to have my husband. Great story!
I just have to know if she sent him any money! Truth or fiction--no please. This scoundrel surely did make me happy to have my husband. Great story!
I just have to know if she sent him any money! Truth or fiction--no please. This scoundrel surely did make me happy to have my husband. Great story!
I just have to know if she sent him any money! Truth or fiction--no please. This scoundrel surely did make me happy to have my husband. Great story!
Verna, no she didn't send him half of her income tax refund. She wouldn't have even if he'd sent her his new address (which he never did).
This is a true story, by the way.

01/18/19
I was antsy to see where this was going. On topic and well told, though I'm sorry to see the guy turned out to be such a crumb.
01/18/19
You have summed up the topic so well - and so brutally. I hope you are well-rewarded for it - almost as much as I hope Martin gets what's due to him.
What a sad witness from someone who claimed to be a Christian. Thank you for sharing this.
01/19/19
Interesting read! I would have been distrustful of a 21 year old man in the first place-still very immature. Sad that things like this do happen.
01/19/19
What a sad story. Those 60 words broke my heart too, especially knowing it's true.
01/21/19
My heart ached while reading this well written entry.

Thank you for sharing with us.

God BLess~
I wish you could hear me screaming as I read. This is a too-common event. You grabbed my attention and held it to the end. Just last night my husband and I were talking. People have asked him why he stays with me given my health conditions. I've got a good hubby because he is dumbfounded that anyone would even think that for better or worse doesn't actually mean you stay even during the hard times. I could totally relate to this MC!
Congratulations on ranking 12 overall. Happy Dance!