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01/17/19
Thank the Lord for answering prayers and that plans fell through.It sounds like it would have been a trip of sheer misery.
01/18/19
I like how you have kept a light, teenage voice in what could have been a total disaster. Well done.
01/19/19
Sounds like an awesome adventure in theory, maybe not so much if this girl had to live it.
I like how you linked the last line to the heart of the story. My dad was a dreamer, and talked of doing so much, but nothing ever came of his dreams.
01/21/19
Nicely told and nicely done,
thank you.
God bless~
01/21/19
Great story and I love the title. I can just hear a 16 year old girl saying that with great disgust! Right on topic, thanks.
This is an interesting story. The Galápagos is a dream destination of mine, but on a modern cool cruise ship, not the boat you described. I didn't see the ending coming at all.
Congratulations on ranking 21 overall. Happy Dance!