The Official Writing Challenge
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I love this. We have a lot in common. During the summers, I love to walk at night and stare at the moon and stars. There's just something about the vastness. I can't but help wonder how anyone can look at them and not see God. You painted a stunning picture for me.
It's been a while since I accessed the FW site. So glad I did today. This is so uniquely beautiful.
02/19/16
Very nice. Great take on the theme and well done. Good job!
02/20/16
This lovely poem perfectly reflects my thoughts. Like Shann, I can spend hours gazing at the night sky or watching the tides come and go, and I can never understand how people don't see God's fingerprint all over it. Great take on the topic!
02/20/16
This paints Indefatigable in the gentlest descriptions I can imagine. Well done.
02/20/16
This paints Indefatigable in the gentlest descriptions I can imagine. Well done.
02/21/16
This is lovely, Verna. You tell in beautiful verse of creation's tirelessness and God's indefatigability (hope I spelled that correctly!).
02/21/16
This is a beautiful soft poem and a different angle on indefatigable then I'd expected :-) well done
02/21/16
Praise for our great indefatigable God rose up in me as I read your poem. Very uplifting.
02/23/16
I really enjoyed your use of the topic to describe creations perfection!
Exquisite.
02/25/16
A lovely gentle poem that speaks so eloquently of our God and His wonderful creation. I SO enjoyed it.
Congratulations! I'm so happily dancing for you!
02/25/16
Ahhhhhh! Congratulations, Verna, for your EC placement. God bless.
02/25/16
Congratulations, Verna, on your well deserved 9th place EC award. Your poem paints a wonderful picture of God's complex creation working tirelessly on our behalf.
02/26/16
Congratulations!
I've often thought of the thing that we're just discovering now in this millinium - that were there at Creation - things too small or too far away for the natural eye to see.
Great thoughts!