The Official Writing Challenge
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12/02/10
This was a beautiful, poetic retelling of a wonderful Bible passage. Well done!
A wonderful poem and a story that fits the subject so brilliantly.
a great poem about rhe road to emmaus experience and how an encounter with the risen Lord will not only change our life but body language. Super entry.
This is so beautiful and your description of the body language was right on.
12/06/10
What a great idea for this topic. Beautifully presented.
I loved the last stanza --

In mind I see their glad return—
Oh how good news within them burned!
Their faces beaming joyous glow,
Imparting hope where e’er they go—
Their best Friend’s risen! Don’t you know?
Congratulations on your EC!!!
12/09/10
Great job with this week's topic. I liked the retelling of this Biblical account. I, too, liked the last stanza. Congrats on your EC. Well done.
I was hoping this would place. Great job. And congrats on EC!
Congratulations on an EC for your excellent poem. For me, the last stanza said it all.