The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! This was a mouthful. What an amazing description of the interaction between a teacher and a troubled teen. I can picture everything from the looks on their faces to the crushed cookies. Great job!
Wow this is so powerful. My heart hurts for both the student and the teacher. There must be so many students who ate just screaming out for help and so many teachers who care so deey as to reach out and give them a lifeline to safety.
Wow, this is such a powerful image. Excellent.
Wow. This was riveting! Good job.
Congratulations on your EC!!!
Being a teacher, this poem especially moved me. Beautiful and sad all wrapped into one poem. Well done. Congrats on your special recognition.
This poem touched me in a number of ways. First as an artist it was superb. Secondly as a reader you drew me in totally and had me emotionally involved. And thirdly I could identify with the poem.
Excellent job. Congrats on EC placement.
Congratulations, Beth! Loved this poem on sooo many levels!!!!!!!!
This poem is truly awesome, one I won't forget. Congratulations on your well-deserved EC.