The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a lovely monologue. You pulled me in and I could feel your passion. Be careful of tense changes; I noticed you switched a few times from past to present and back again. You did a fine job of writing on topic though, bringing the story to life, and I always enjoy your monologues.
12/17/24
Well done! Hope this piece places well.
Congratulations on your EC. Happy Dance!
12/19/24
Congrats! This stirred my ‘mother heart’.