The Official Writing Challenge
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I can relate to this being a teen mother myself. I empathize with the mom's frustration as well with the daughter's fears. You did a nice job of having the rain match the mood and pacing. This isn't an easy topic, but an important one. Good job.
Tough subject, but you described the scene so well. I felt like I was there, listening to the conversation.
04/27/19
Excellent job with the subject matter, you did a fantastic job and on topic.

Blessings~
04/27/19
An important and vulnerable look at the life that happens rain or shine. Blessings. Those centers have helped so many.
Congratulations on your EC. Happy Dance!