The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful job with the topic and clever story.
Good message at the end.
Interesting names for your characters! I was trying to see if they had underlying meanings, but could find none. Cute ending.
This is a cute story. It took me back to a simpler time, yet problems were still evident in those times. You have a delightful sense of humor and an out-of-the-box idea. Nicely done.
The pig wins the pie and the pig boy wins the girl.

Very creative.