The Official Writing Challenge
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This was such an important message. Well done, and beautifully written.
Thank you.
God bless~
This was so about what I feel and experience when I go hiking in my neighborhood of California. Your descriptions were so on point on what enjoying the challenges of the great outdoors really means. Great writing. Well done. One thing: Pay attention to your spacing between paragraphs.
You do a nice job of delivering a powerful message. Although I'm not a big outdoor person, I could relate to the MC. Nicely done.
I experienced a sudden rain storm a couple of days ago- it was unexpected and unusual for us. Your descriptions were very graphic and I could see it all. I don't really see where the topic of "home" fits it. Perhaps I just missed it.
Congratulations on your 10th place finish.

Your story made me thing of spring--the mixing of gray clouds and the hint of sunshine.
God Bless~