The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful! Lovely! Great! You pull rhymes together seamlessly. What a gift.
Your poem is not only great in its construction but in its conclusion, that God's Word is the best road map of all.
"Thy Word is a lamp unto my feet and a light unto my path" would prove that, as would Psalm 16:11, "Thou wilt show me the path of life..."

Your rhyme and meter are right on target and should place you high among the winners.
"And as God guides, I shall not fear." Such comforting words. This is very well done. Thank you for sharing.
Smooooth as butter. Clear premise, nice delivery. It's nice to see a true word craftsman. *thumbs up*
A great poem with a great finishing message.
This flowed so nicely- great job!
This is a great poem. It flows nicely and made me smile. I prefer the old maps, and having God guide us is the best map of all.
You make writing poetry seem so easy. I really enjoyed the honest assessment of reading a road map, but especially liked the conclusion. God's Word really is the only map that gets us where we need to go in this life.
Nicely done!
I smiled at those maps with the fine print that were hard to hold and impossible to fold. I remember them well. Yes, God is our guide in life, for sure. Thanks for this poem.
God BLess~
Congrats Verna for your 9th place win. This was brilliant.