The Official Writing Challenge
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10/19/18
I enjoyed this well-written story. Thanks for sharing.
Those boys misguided opinions don't have a chance. The mother and the Lord are the majority. Enjoyed it. Thank you.
*boys'
10/24/18
I enjoyed the incorporation of archaeology with this topic. I thought the use of dialogue was good but I got a little lost in the 2nd half with who was talking. Maybe include a few more tags to show which brother is talking and what they are doing? I also wanted to see more of a distinction between the brothers.
Congratulations on ranking 15 overall. Happy Dance!
10/27/18
Just a note from the author (that I should have put on it before I submitted): This story is a fictional account of a true discovery by Dr. Eilat Mazar. Although there are many perspectives on the variety of discoveries, Biblical archaeology continues to confirm places and events we read about in God's word.