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10/18/18
Such a sad story, but at least both Chelsea and the doctor turned to Jesus. God bless.
10/19/18
What a well-written, heart-wrenching story! With a surprise ending, too.
10/23/18
Good job addressing sms developing a tough topic. I like how you showed a compassionate and hopeful heart toward the girl and the doctor.
Red ink: there were some editing errors that took away from the overall flow of the story. I also think it would have flowed better to have both futures of the characters included at the end, rather than going forward in Chelsea's life, then back in time to the doctors view after the abortion, then forward in time for his life.