The Official Writing Challenge
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10/18/18
Wow, I must be in a fragile mood because I cried at the end of this. From working for years in a ministry in downtown Phoenix where donated food sources, as mentioned in this story, provided meals for those we helped. Good writing. God bless.
10/19/18
Wow - what an eye-opener. Thanks for sharing this. A great entry, with an even greater message. Hope it does well!
10/21/18
Great job with this poignant and cleverly written piece.
Love it. Reminds me of Ruth gleaning in Boaz's field before she became King David's grandmother. (!) God DID make a law...to leave some grain in the corners of the field, and to leave on the ground anything they dropped while gathering the wheat...for the hungry. And didn't Jesus tell us that if God fed the little birds, wouldn't he feed us too? I also enjoyed reading the names of your characters. (Chuckle)
10/25/18
Congratulations!
10/27/18
Congratulations on your EC, and for the clarity and depth - and the challenge - of your story.