The Official Writing Challenge
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09/06/18
I liked the retelling of this story. Vivid descriptions drew me in.
09/08/18
Well done...I enjoyed this.
Blessings~
I think you did a great job of retelling this story and bringing it to life with nice vivid pictures.
Congratulations on ranking 11th overall. Happy Dance!
10/01/18
Inspiring!
A reminder to me that the everyday humdrum stuff of life is not all there is, but a test for the more spectacular stuff to come.
I like the way the children believed in their simplicity.
I like the way Moses even struggled with his own faith at times, and Aaron encouraged him, showing true repentance for his own past disobedience.
Well done, Bro!