The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 204 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
01/29/18
Great job presenting the clear, flowing action and the disjointed moments in and out of consciousness. I could see and feel the scenes playing out.
01/30/18
Descriptive, imaginative, and absorbing. Well done
I really enjoyed this. I've had a dream before where I talked to God or He to me. It was much like your story. Congratulations on ranking 12 overall. Happy Dance!