The Official Writing Challenge
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01/29/18
Excellent job building the scene and creating the suspense. I found myself a little nervous, right alongside the mc.
01/30/18
Very pictorial and suspenseful build-up to the open-ended close/
02/01/18
Great job building the suspense and an original use of the topic. Congrats on your EC placing.
02/01/18
Congrats on your placing and your EC. Well done Ellen.
02/01/18
Congratulations on your 3rd place finish, Ellen.

I was on the edge of my seat waiting to see if she would get her precious cargo home.
You really did a great job of showing suspense in this wonderful story.