The Official Writing Challenge
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11/10/17
Well done!
Blessings~
11/10/17
I liked the line: ...struggling together for striving at arm's length.

This story teaches many good lessons.
11/12/17
The title certainly intrigued me. Good choice for catching readers attention.
I didn't quite get the "faking" connection in the story itself.
Great ending with a good moral. Was that when Kevin finally "made it"?
Congratulations on ranking 18 overall. Happy Dance!
11/17/17
I love all the detail and down to earth thinking in your MC. There's a worthy message in there too. Great job.