The Official Writing Challenge
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This is so sweet. I could really picture the scene and smell the trees and even the manure. To me, that is such a sweet smell because it reminds me of home.
Beautiful, captivating prose. It captured the mood of escape wonderfully.
Great job with the topic in this descriptive and ornate piece.
Such a gift you have to make us feel just what the characters are feeling, and with the poetic descriptions as an extra blessing! I even learned a word new to me! Definitely worthy of first place!
Congratulations on your 1st place win, Ann. I marked it to my favorites. I liked the sweet sentimentality.
Congratulations! This was one of my favorites. Happy Dance!
So descriptive and absorbing that you almost make us guilty for intruding on this lady's privacy. Very skilful writing.
Congratulations on your win.
This is beautiful writing Ann. Congratulations on your first place which is truly well-deserved.