The Official Writing Challenge
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This is so sweet. I could really picture the scene and smell the trees and even the manure. To me, that is such a sweet smell because it reminds me of home.
07/21/17
Beautiful, captivating prose. It captured the mood of escape wonderfully.
07/21/17
Great job with the topic in this descriptive and ornate piece.
Blessings~
Such a gift you have to make us feel just what the characters are feeling, and with the poetic descriptions as an extra blessing! I even learned a word new to me! Definitely worthy of first place!
07/27/17
Congratulations on your 1st place win, Ann. I marked it to my favorites. I liked the sweet sentimentality.
Congratulations! This was one of my favorites. Happy Dance!
07/28/17
So descriptive and absorbing that you almost make us guilty for intruding on this lady's privacy. Very skilful writing.
Congratulations on your win.
07/28/17
This is beautiful writing Ann. Congratulations on your first place which is truly well-deserved.