The Official Writing Challenge
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07/13/17
First, let me say that I am not a judge of poetry. I seldom read it.

Having said that, I LOVED The Watching Crowd. It certainly reflects today's times. Well done!
07/13/17
This is excellent!

With just a few well-chosen words, you painted a vivid picture.

Very well done.

My only critique would be this story centers as much on the individual as it does on the crowd - but it is an amazing story and I especially savored the ending
07/13/17
As one of the watching crowd for your entry I want to say thanks for taking the time to creatively bring a New Testament principle into a tangible image. Good flow.
07/14/17
Great job!
Blessings
Wow! This is just wow!
What a wonderful message, presented in wonderful poetry!
07/20/17
Congrats on a great piece of work!
Blessings~
07/20/17
This is powerful in its stark symplicity. With unneccessary words removed, the arrow is able to shoot right to the heart. Very well done!
07/20/17
Congratulations, Melanie. I love your style and your heart.
07/20/17
Congratulations on your 1st place finish, Melanie. I'm so glad to see you're writing again. Your poem painted a vivid picture of today and yesterday (during Jesus' times).
07/21/17
Wow and double wow! So well written and poignant. A definite deserved win. Congratulations!
10/11/17
Excellent message. Short and to the point.