The Official Writing Challenge
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This beer-addicted critter wasn't sticky-beaking around the barn begging for birdseed, he was hopping around your haystack hoping for hops! Loved it lots. I think you write well in any genre you wish,including some of your own, like barnyard fantastical farce. Keep it coming.
07/26/15
I loved this very funny story. Great narrator's voice. You know how to make your reader laugh. I could imagine the whole scene with your crazy descriptions.
07/27/15
Loved it, loved it, loved it! Don't know what else to say apart from wish I had your talent. This has to be the winner this week.
07/27/15
I forgot I was reading there for a second;) I think that's one of the highest compliments I might pay a writer. Great job.
07/27/15
You've packed so much fun into this story - all within the word count. But I can't help wondering if you wouldn't peac-ockasionally at how many words you had left...
Thanks for a great, understated commentary on a fast-ical event; but could you please tell us which particular trigger was responsible for the lemur's losing her at-truck-tion for your bucolic bliss?
07/28/15
I loved this! You are indeed a master!
This was so cleverly done. You've paced it brilliantly and the descriptions of the peacock and his behaviour were priceless. I loved the images you created in my mind of the whole scene. Awesome, awesome job!
I read this again and laughed so much. 'Wide-eyed lemur on top of an elephant'- That breaks me up. Have you thought of conducting safaris from the Texas ranch? There could be money in it when the crops fail.Then again you could just write.
07/30/15
I really did enjoy this hilarious story. I'm still laughing! Congratulations on your EC placing.
Massive congratulations on your EC!
07/31/15
Congratulations on your 9th place EC award. It was a fun read.
07/31/15
oh my! Complete enjoyment for this former farm girl. Your humor is top-notch. I loved this. Congrats on your EC.
07/31/15
Loved this!
Congrats!
God bless~
07/31/15
Loved this!
Congrats!
God bless~