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Well done. Poignant - Real - Captivating story
Suicide/Murder is so unfortunate. I'm not sure we can ever understand the pain that drove this man to commit such an act (Some people are just evil, but that doesn't seem the case here).

The photographs are a reminder of happier times.
I was struck by the poignant title, considering what happened. I found your piece very moving.
Wow, this is simply stunning. I felt like you whisked me back in time. I could almost see the yellow paper around the photos. My heart just ached for that little naive girl in the pictures. Congratulations on ranking 13th overall. Happy Dance!