The Official Writing Challenge
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07/26/15
Excellent analogies. Your story was well thought out. However, I'm not sure if it fits the topic; unless, the road signs were souvenirs.
I thought this was well written and the analogies were well done. However, I think it needed linking more explicitly to the topic. That said, it was a piece I will remember for its creative approach. Great job!