The Official Writing Challenge
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Strong material here, which the word limit may have rushed a little. It took me a second reading to pick up the details about Abby's parents in your seventh paragraph. This para may have needed more development for greater clarity - as would your close - for I believe you have given us a powerful synopsis of a much longer and very absorbing novel.

I read this all the way through and enjoyed, thanks.
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