The Official Writing Challenge
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Powerfully descriptive and totally absorbing work here, which should rate well. If not, it's an invitation for the rest of us to get out of our comfort zones and care more actively for people who too easily become invisible.
Wow, this piece is amazing. You brought tears to my eyes. I loved the hauntingly beautiful picture that you painted. There are many messages in this piece. I liked the one especially about Jane. We certainly aren't always what we may seem to be. This is a great story and tops my favorite list this week.
This was my favourite this week.A well written and beautifully told story. It touched my heart.