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This story symbolized very well what true surrender to God means. It was interesting--beginning to end.
I thought this story illustrated the way we can stray from the path He has prepared for us, but also, how He brings us back.
You took me back to similar miseries forty-five years ago. I remember the pain, the heartbreak of surrendering to a man who literally became my false god. I still have twinges. Thank you for this compelling story . . .
That my dear, was too close to home. Nice story.
05/19/15
I love this. All too often, we give ourselves over to the things of the world, only to find out that doesn't work out how we thought it would. Great job with this.
Really powerful piece that speaks of hope. It was a great take on the topic and something that many people can relate to. Thanks for sharing!
05/21/15
You have crafted a compelling and rich tale in so few words. I'd like to read something longer from you, which is the best compliment a writer can receive. Thanks for the real-life drama that portrays the tragic situation and the powerful truth of Christ's love and forgiveness.
Congratulations on ranking 13 overall! Happy Dance!