The Official Writing Challenge
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05/15/15
This reads like a beautiful prayer covered in peace. The last line of each verse ties this all together. Nicely done.
I really liked this entry. A beautiful illustration of ongoing surrender.
This brings me to tears of joy and sorrow. What an expressive and well-written paeon of praise to our wondrous Creator!
05/19/15
Amen.
This is so gently touching to the soul. Thank you.
I absolutely LOVE this! It says it all. No more needs to be said!
05/19/15
I love the repetition of "May this be..." Great job.
Beautiful take on the topic - this showed surrender in every way. I liked the way you showed surrender to be a lifestyle, not a one-off decision. Great job!
05/21/15
I love how you lavishly described each different area to be surrendered. Beautiful work! Many congrats on your EC! <3
05/24/15
Beautifully expressed, Verna. Congratulations on your EC for this powerful declaration of living out your faith.