The Official Writing Challenge
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Like how you brought the scriptures alive through Maizie. Well done, enjoyed the read.
Bravo! Maizie is so real and in an annoying sort of way, quite entertaining:) I chuckled whenever I got to peek insider her head. I think you'll do well with this!
Congratulations on ranking 12 overall! Happy Dance!
I thought you did a great job of capturing a disgruntled person. Seems like I've met her somewhere before. Great movement to the story. Thanks for all your hard work!