The Official Writing Challenge
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02/06/15
Ballad of the Lazy J — where it’s name could be lazy, but not the workers. Entertaining read! Enjoyed.
I really enjoyed the humour and authentic feel of this. The gentle rhythm definitely added to the carefree language. Brilliantly done!
02/07/15
that was fantastic!that was a fun take on the topic :-) he really was a sloth wasn't he :-)I love your rhythm and crafty rhymes! Your work is wonderful to read
02/08/15
What fun! I love not only the story, but the rhythm that feels like a horse galloping across the plains and the clever rhymes that made me smile.
02/08/15
Hehe. This is great. I love it.
I enjoy the descriptions of sloth in this fun poem.
02/09/15
I felt I should 'steer' clear of commenting, but then I 'herd' a voice prompting me. Very enjoyable story set into a rhythm that echoes horse-travel so well.
Should rate highly.
02/09/15
Whimsically delightful coverage of the topic. Highly enjoyable. Good work. Certainly your style is unmistakable, leaving little doubt who the author is. ☺
02/12/15
Love your humorous limerick of a sloth. Your word choice was excellent. Congratulations on first place!
02/12/15
Yet another win! Well deserved. Congratulations.
02/12/15
Congratulations on your 1st place win! So happy for you!
02/12/15
Your article was fun to read and the point of your story was easily caught. Great job. Congratulations!
02/12/15
Congrats Ann.

God bless
02/13/15
Wow! What fun! I love the whole ranch setting (brings back my Iowa farm memories). Congrats, Ann. This is wonderful!
Very, very funny, lovely rhythm - a worthy winner!
03/22/15
I felt right at home on the range. Like most comments before mine, the rhythm had a life of it's own. Great job, and congratulations on first place!