The Official Writing Challenge
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Ballad of the Lazy J where its name could be lazy, but not the workers. Entertaining read! Enjoyed.
I really enjoyed the humour and authentic feel of this. The gentle rhythm definitely added to the carefree language. Brilliantly done!
that was fantastic!that was a fun take on the topic :-) he really was a sloth wasn't he :-)I love your rhythm and crafty rhymes! Your work is wonderful to read
What fun! I love not only the story, but the rhythm that feels like a horse galloping across the plains and the clever rhymes that made me smile.
Hehe. This is great. I love it.
I enjoy the descriptions of sloth in this fun poem.
I felt I should 'steer' clear of commenting, but then I 'herd' a voice prompting me. Very enjoyable story set into a rhythm that echoes horse-travel so well.
Should rate highly.
Whimsically delightful coverage of the topic. Highly enjoyable. Good work. Certainly your style is unmistakable, leaving little doubt who the author is. ☺
Love your humorous limerick of a sloth. Your word choice was excellent. Congratulations on first place!
Yet another win! Well deserved. Congratulations.
Congratulations on your 1st place win! So happy for you!
Your article was fun to read and the point of your story was easily caught. Great job. Congratulations!
Congrats Ann.

God bless
Wow! What fun! I love the whole ranch setting (brings back my Iowa farm memories). Congrats, Ann. This is wonderful!
Very, very funny, lovely rhythm - a worthy winner!
I felt right at home on the range. Like most comments before mine, the rhythm had a life of it's own. Great job, and congratulations on first place!