The Official Writing Challenge
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02/05/15
What a creative and cute story—would make an awesome children’s book! Great job, enjoyed the read.
This hit the topic 100% and I could see this published as a children's story. Great piece!
02/07/15
I agree with the others. This would be a wonderful children's book. Imagine the illustration!
02/07/15
This is a delightful little story! An easy read that rounds out nicely! I like the queen in her graciousness:) great job
02/07/15
Bravo! I love this fable, and like the previous commenters can see it as an illustrated children's story. You have powerfully and simply shown the truth of 1 Thessalonians 3:10 - "The one who is unwilling to work shall not eat."
02/07/15
Cute ending! I'm glad the queen helped him out and didn't just leave him to his own desires.
02/08/15
Amen to the children's book idea. I first thought we were going to explore all Argon's ant-cestors, but you brought everything together very well.
Delightful fable!
02/10/15
Fun! And agree with the children's tale idea.
02/12/15
Loved it! Congratulations.
02/12/15
Congratulations on your well deserved win!
02/12/15
Congrats,

God bless~
02/13/15
I like your creative idea for the topic. This could also be a good story for a children's magazine.