The Official Writing Challenge
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01/16/15
Perfect title! Your story is a well written, perfect reminder that something doesnt have to be bad or evil, for our obsessive lust for it, to turn it into something bad. Enjoyed the read, well done.
01/16/15
You had me there. I never guessed until it was spelled out for me. Certainly held my interest right through. Great job.
01/16/15
I know an individual who is obsessed with his car...and this sounds like it could be him and his wife!

Well done, and a good example of lust and how it can consume someone no matter the "content" in which it appears.

God bless~
01/21/15
Great story, I just knew there would be a twist. Alot of the lines and imagery were excellent.
Congratulations on ranking 13 overall! Happy Dance!