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01/15/15
Ah, the first an ancient giving in to lust. Well done. I imagine this is how Eve would have told the story.
01/16/15
Wow! Powerful, compelling and awesome in its entirety. Fantastic job with brining the topic to life. Well done, I loved it.

God bless~

01/20/15
This is most definitely a brilliant idea for the topic - the start of our fallen nature and our struggle with sin. Really great telling - and some of those lines were exceptional, like the clinging of the fruit to the branch. It was thought provoking that you suggest that Eve's temptation was strong way before Satan even uttered his first whisper.
01/22/15
Congratulations Linda!
Way to go. Excellent job.

GOd bless~