The Official Writing Challenge
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This is lovely. I especially enjoyed the vision of the sparrow hopping along. God is amazing, and I have no doubt that he created many of the animals to bless us when we feel hopeless.
I love the hope that shines through. I thought a bit about the end of the book of Job, where God gave him double of all he had lost in his troubles. Thanks for the reminder of what becomes possible when God steps into what appears to be insurmountable problems.
12/06/14
This is so very well written. I felt the pain and desperation of the MC, dealing with the temptation of coveting and wanting to steal the neighbors wood. So real, that Satan attacks us at our weakest points. Well done!
God is good. I'm glad He chose to bless you with this small blessing and with your wonderful gift of words.
12/06/14
I felt your pain throughout this story. Once friends who now seem to be accusers. Quick to blame, but don't understand. Thankfully God sent one true friend around to lift you up.

Wonderful, powerful story. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, LaVonne
12/07/14
He meets us at the bottom of the pit and lifts us to soar with Him on the wind. An honest and encouraging word to everyone who has walked the hard path. Beautiful writing.
Oh, thank you so much for sharing the reality of your vivid pain, your desperate prayer, and your testimony of God's mercy and grace. It deeply touched my heart and I'm sure many others too. Thankyou for using your wonderful gift for His Glory.
12/11/14
Congrats Ann

God bless~