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12/06/14
Wonderful article--not just because I love dogs, but because you used beautiful imagery and an effective analogy. Love my Master!

Blessings.
This is beautiful. You're a true artist, painting beautiful pictures in my head. I could see the paw prints in the sand. This fit my life recently, and I needed to hear this. I love how God orchestrates everything, leaving me with a beautiful message of inspiration. Thank you for being God's fingers as you typed this message just for me.
12/06/14
Love a good dog/person relationship story. Having three dogs myself, I certainly relate to the illustrations they demonstrate on loving the Master. Well done.
12/06/14
Forgot to mention, I thinking topic was spot-on. It was an inspiring read. Maybe one or two of the longer paragraphs could have been broken up. Well done, as usual.
This is an excellent devotional, perfect for the topic, and filled with descriptive details that add to the reading pleasure.
12/06/14
Absorbing word pictures that lead to an inspiring bridge across to a strong devotional thought. Well done.
12/06/14
I never thought of God as being my master. It is good to know He is always watching out for us and taking care of us.

I like how you put your words together in such a creative way. Blessings, LaVonne
12/07/14
The imagery in your story was so vivid I felt like I was with you on that beach. Lovely writing and wonderful truth!
12/08/14
Yes, I believe you did fulfill the prompt. I have five loving dogs and thank God often for them but have never compared how our relationship is to that of God and me. Food for thought. Thank you.
What a lovely parable - and parallel! I definitely found it inspirational. Your great descriptive writing paints really vivid images and the spiritual lessons stand out with wonderful clarity. Thankyou.
Congratulations! Happy Dance!
12/11/14
Congrats

God bless~
So happy to see this in EC!