The Official Writing Challenge
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11/29/14
I love the emotional struggle going on here in the heart of the young man - how he thought he had forgiven but the old anger came back to haunt him when his guard was down. It would be interesting to re-write this in present tense, first person, through the eyes of the main character.
12/03/14
Loved it! Well done!

God bless~
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At first, I wasn't going to read it. It's been a long day, you know the excuses. I have tears in my eyes. It's like you wrote this story for me as I'm going through something quite similar. You blessed me more than I can ever say. It reminded me that sometimes, if someone has really hurt us, we may need to forgive them more than once. Brilliant piece. Thank you so much.