The Official Writing Challenge
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12/01/14
I could picture this like as a 1950's movie. Classy, and vivid. The MC's honest struggle was compelling. I loved it.
12/03/14
Gripping and jarring.
Well done.
God bless~
Oh my, I am finding bits of my past splattered over so many stories. I so can relate to your MC, I felt the same way when my grandfather died. I even felt a bit guilty because I'd been wondering if I'd get to miss school if he died. It was also the first time I saw my father cry. This was so real and intense. I love the message and you nailed the genre. Congratulations on ranking 12 overall! Happy Dance!