The Official Writing Challenge
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Now THIS is fantasy. :-) I was on the edge of my seat right to the brilliant end. Your imagination knew no bounds and neither did your use of descriptive language. I saw, I felt, and I heard. And I love how you introduced the "inner" thoughts. Creative writing at its best!
I must admit I am not a fan of this current topic and never have been...BUT-- the stories are so imaginative and clever, yours included!

Pristine writing, almost makes me appreciate "Sci-Fi!"

God bless~

Wonderful sci-fi writing --had me holding my breath!
Tracy, fabulous job!
God bless~
Congratulations. This held me from beginning to end. Brilliant.