The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a winner, I think. Great writing and story line.
10/24/14
Excellent writing. Well done...again, almost makes me appreciate the topic this week.

God bless~
Futuristic ranching... I do wonder what John Wayne would say. :o)

I enjoyed your entry. Great job!
10/27/14
All of it is so creative, but
I liked,

"The answer was clear as tylaxium crystal to Wyn."


Had to grab my dictionary, love new words!
10/27/14
Wow! This was excellent. The mix of old and new and the heart break of being separated from our natural environment was palpable. Very well done.
10/28/14
Wow! I love this sci-fi futuristic tale (and the cowbird). :) I applaud your creative genius. I remember my Dad pulling a lot of calves. Your knowledge of ranching plus your imagination combined to make a wonderful story. Excellent work!
Magnificent . . .
Loving you in and through and because of the Christ, Judi
1 Timothy 3:16 KJV
. . . like a sagebrush-scented wind, surging through his veins. . . was a perfect ending--perfect line for me in this fantastic sci-fi story.
10/29/14
Great story! And the old, hands-on method came into its own. Well done with this!
10/30/14
Congrats!

God bless~
Congratulations - I enjoyed reading this very much. Very well written.