The Official Writing Challenge
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10/24/14
Interesting story, clever and crafted quite well.

God bless~
Riveting! Superb characterizations and enjoyable banter . . .
Fantastic fantasy! I thoroughly enjoyed this well crafted entry.
10/28/14
Wonderful creativity and imagination! I enjoyed so many of your lines and humor, like "bone to pick" and "humerus." It was great reading a Hoomi original again. Welcome back!
I loved how real you made your characters. Thank you for a fantastic read.
Definitely a fun read. Love your creativity and puns, and Death's comments about atheists.
10/30/14
Congrats.
God bless~