The Official Writing Challenge
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Quite a detailed read. Great writing in this right on topic entry.

God bless~
The setting was completely tangible. I was with your MC in the fog hearing those shells crack as they snacked on them. Super work on this bit of fantasy!
Like finding the pearl in the oyster - this is a true jewel . . .
Loving you in and through and because of the Christ, Judi
1 Timothy 3:16 KJV
Very atmospheric material. I hope your boat is a big one, because I reckon every reader is right in there with you.
Brilliant writing.
With your well written descriptive details, this has a splendid aura of mystery. I like how you left the ending open. One of my favorites!
This was really vivid, the descriptions brought it to life. Thank you for sharing.
An intriguing story, well told, leaving us with the question: What really happened? Great writing!
Congratulations on ranking 20 overall! Happy Dance!