The Official Writing Challenge
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Compelling story with a satisfying ending. Enjoyed it very much.
Awww...This was a moving tale, and it held my attention all the way through. I wonder at the end, "does the mom peacefully go home to the Lord?" Or, "Does she just take a nap?" I always see two endings to every story.

Anyhow, great job!

God bless~
What a sad story that is true for way too many siblings. This just pulled at my heart, especially when the father died not connecting with his daughter and even snubbing her from the grave. Such intensity. Congratulations on ranking 19th overall.