The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! Excellent story, and an engaging read. Loved it.
05/29/14
WEll done!

Felt as if I was reading a book, great ending.

God bless~
05/30/14
This was rich! The dialogue was authentic. The storyline was very engaging and realistic, even though it's about long ago royalty. I loved this.
06/05/14
COngrats Leola!

Loved it.

God bless~
06/05/14
Proverbs 27:17 - "As iron sharpens iron..."

Great job with this tale. These were solid, believable characters and a story that unfolded as though it could have been true, and not just fiction.

The lesson of holding to your principles and acknowledgement that you never know someone else's heart, are subtle but strong.

Great job! Congratulations on your placement this week!
06/05/14
Oh wow! I loved the journey you took me on in this story! I was pleasantly delighted and surprised with the ending. What a clever story line and craftsmanship! Many congrats on your EC, Leola!
06/06/14
So beautiful Leola! I knew this would do well. It was one of my favorites.
06/12/14
You crafted an exceptional tale.

It would be an excellent story line for a book.