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04/10/14
I like the connection you illustrated here between the great-grandfather and the boy. It highlights that age is not the hurdle we sometimes make it out to be...no matter the age, communication is still the key. You did an excellent job of showing us that it's much easier to reach the lost if we speak their language.

Thanks for sharing this entry with us!
04/11/14
The word play between the generations was priceless and the message very clear. Well done!
04/13/14
Beautiful message and wonderful interaction with realistic dialogue between the generations. Communication is a "lost art" that is slowly dying, and this etnry illustrated the need and importance of keeping it alive.

well done.

God bless~
04/16/14
I really enjoyed your story! I loved all the variations on the chillax message that you wove into it. What great repartee! An amusing and endearing story. Well done!
Congratulations on ranking 22 overall. Happy Dance!!