The Official Writing Challenge
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This was very captivating from the beginning. I felt like I was around that fire. Excellent writing. My only negative comment is that it seems a bit of a stretch for the topic. Other than that it's very, very good.
My one criticism would be that you name the boy Brotski in one spot and Grotski (at least that's how I read it).

Other than that, it was a very fascinating and tense read. Overall, a very nice job.
Entertaining and well written entry. Could easily be a booklet with expansion of words.

Well done!

God bless~