The Official Writing Challenge
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03/08/14
Your title was a good choice that introduced the tone of your piece. Many have come and gone, but we still wait for the sure coming of our Lord; even though some remain skeptical.

Opinion: Your story was consistent with what I saw as the main character's point of view until an abrupt change in the last sentence. Perhaps a few more sentences to explain why the MC suddenly went from "trying to set me straight" to praying, working, waiting, etc.

Thanks for reminding us that no matter how much others may doubt, we should not lose hope.
03/10/14
Great details here - you did a great job of setting the tone. Strong piece - thanks for sharing!
03/11/14
Enjoyed this! Thank you.

God bless~
03/13/14
Very enjoyable read; helped lift my spirits with an important reminder that Jesus is coming soon.
Congratulations on ranking 27 overall!