The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/14
That poor dumb animal showed a lot more wisdom than his master. You're right, he [the donkey] was surely at his wit's end. I love your point of view here and your ending paragraph has the power to send chills to the reader. Wow!
02/24/14
Great job with this familar Biblical story. I always cringe when I read this story, but smile with how the Lord used the Donkey to speak and to bring him to his knees.

God bless~
02/26/14
A great take on the topic. It drew me in from the start.
I'm not sure that I followed why the rest of the story would make the donkey empathise with the Balak.
I loved the way you got into the donkey's mind. It sounded authentic and gave him such a likeable character.
Congratulations on ranking 14th overall!