The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/14
What a gripping and well-told story. I was carried along with the MC by your great descriptive writing. A great use of this topic. Well done!
You did such a fantastic job of pulling me into the story that my heart is pounding as my claustrophobia makes me shudder. This story is important in so many ways. We need to remind people what that war was like. Even more important is God knows... Everything. Brilliant writing.
02/05/14
Riveting! You told this story so well that I felt as if I was there with the MC!

Excellent.

God bless~
02/05/14
Masterfully told! If this is not based on a true account it would surprise me for reads like one! Either way, powerfully told! And I love the ending with the next mission being reading the Bible!
02/06/14
Congratulations!

God bless~
02/06/14
oh wow! You had me completely spellbound by the progression of the story. Double Wow! This is excellent writing. Congrats on your Editor's Choice award, Elizabeth!