The Official Writing Challenge
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I really like your Christmas Bear story. I can imagine it becoming a children's picture book. Well done!
This is pure genius. I can't find the words to describe how much this piece touched me. I don't usually notice titles, and in this case I'm so glad I didn't see the title because it would have given away that glorious twist. Not often does a twist take me unaware and when it happens it's pure delight. I never thought a poem would be one of my all-time favorites, but this one definitely made the cut. Thank you for this brilliant piece.
Oh this was such a delightful read! I love bears, I collect them and so the title drew me in right away and then the story had me beginning to end! This would make a wonderful children’s book.
Sweet and moving...with a spectacular ending. Peaceful and serene.

God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 32 overall!