The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful! The range of metaphors for the old man is so powerful. I loved every one of them. So inspiring.
I liked 'the ire of your desire'. Is there a term for this device of taking a word within a larger word and opposing it in this way? Thank you for the enjoyment and great encouragement you gave.
This is a powerful personification. The words just flow off the page and paint a powerful picture.
I liked this! Read it through twice to catch it all and liked it even more the second time. Good job!
Wow- Hauntingly beautiful!

God bless~
What a great picture you showed in this of the old man’s sin nature, and of Christ “saving” from the old man’s bullying! Great use of the topic in this. Well done!
Congrats on your EC!

God bless~
Congratulations Nancy on your well deserved EC win!
Congratulations! God bless you.
KJV Heb 10:26-31
KJV Rev 14:12
Fantastic poem and its message is so identifiable. Beautifully crafted with a kick!