The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed your take on this Bible story and the tell it from the disciple's point of view. It rings true. Well done.
I suspected there might be a few of Jesus and Peter walking on water stories, but your unique POV makes this one stand out. Usually a conversational tone between MC and reader doesn't work, but you masterfully molded your words to make this a delightful read. The lesson at the end is a great one and makes me wonder why more ministers don't preach on that point. It has so much truth in it and is something we can all mediate on. Outstanding writing.
Excellent slant on this story. Loved your reminder that Peter did at least get out of the boat. That was a big act of faith. Goodmpoint; well told.
This was presented in a fresh way, and I enjoyed the entire piece. Nicely done. God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 27 overall!