The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed your poem. I've not written much poetry, so I wouldn't dare try to red ink yours. This line made me pause... "One note, God’s message in full"

Beautiful. Keep writing.
I enjoyed your lovely poem.
I liked the flow and the rythm of this. You can just hear the one note playing over and over: love, love, love...Good job!
This is the song my heart sings - thank you.
Wow! Simply lovely and profound as I ruminate on your adoringly penned words.
a very meaningful poem showing how God's love permeates into all of his creation, even into our sinful world and lives.

Colin Swann (Gold Membership)
I think this is a lovely poem with a very clear message. And I like the way you incorporated the topic. All nicely done.
Ahh, favorite topic to write about. I don't think there are enough words in the English language to fully describe God's awesome, all encompassing love. In short, I loved it.
I love the the persistence within the expressive flow of this gentle poem.
Congratulations on ranking 28 overall!